I Thought I Was Dark

A poem with competitive darkness

I thought I was Dark

Being there is all I wished 

I just wanted to care

holding on to your every word 

wishing I was there

planting seeds of envy 

breaking lovers trust

embracing my last breath 

your clearly not fussed 

I thought I was dark 

heartless and depressed

patience and overwhelming anger

amongst emotions that you test

why do you keep me lingering?

awaiting to be crushed 

Should I give up already 

although my heart you have touched

I thought I was dark 

but compared to you I’m grey

knowing you’re the puppet master

I’m your puppet I must obey 

never hearing your voice 

a distance between us grows

your so much darker than me dear

And it defiantly shows

I care about your point of view

any issues that may arise

you care about yourself 

or many other guys

I’m left here heart in hands

not cared for to say the least

I may as well make an impact

better off deceased 

so once again I’m driven to my final stand

Iodine at the ready 

knife in my free hand 

Is this what is needed 

For the attention that I crave

think you know anything about me

I’m not just another slave

I have feelings as well you know

I also feel pain 

you continue to be darker than me

I will end this childish game

sorry to everyone that cares

I doubt by her I will be missed

Signing out of this life 

but being there is all I wished

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dilan Gray]

I like how you are saying that you are grey compared to the "her" in the poem. I thought that was really interesting. I really love the images, they are great. You always put such strong emotions into your poems, it really is wonderful! Great poem! 100/100

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Fantastic!!!
Amazing darkness my friend (not a pun)
Keep writing man
:)