TwinZ

Another colab with Gwen Goad About twins

TwinZ

I’m ashamed to admit that you’re my twin

so weak and nerdy 

leaving me perplexed 

our image is all we share 

when you try to become annexed

Just leave me to do my own thing

I don’t want to hang around

I want to be so far from you 

always dragging me down

I worked hard for my reputation 

feared among our peers 

teaching you another lesson 

don’t show me your balling tears

you say I will die young

when all I protect is you

I take all the hassle you would receive

but I keep it from your view 

I’m not always going to be here

I wish that you could fight

your so dependent on my courage

what happens when I’m not in sight

socially you are oblivious 

to the stress that you cause

Then you have the audacity 

to point out all my flaws 

I trust you more than anything

a long future you will brave

all this training on self belief

so your own life you can save

our image is a curse in your shadow I remain

I may be the big guy when young 

but you have the brain

So at the minute we are each a one 

But in the future we will be two 

you may hate me now

but I won’t stop loving you

Author's Note

Read Gwen Goads poem Twins
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/pinkgwen/683907/
Please review be as hones as always

Reviews

[Midday_Mystery]

I like the meaning behind this poem.. Siblings all the way back to Cain and Able have had these issues arise in thier live but the last line is what makes all the conflict more meaningful, because the love is rarely lost

So at the minute we are each a one
But in the future we will be two
you may hate me now
but I won’t stop loving you


I dont see this as a twisted piece, rather a excellent devotion to two who are one twins. God Bless you and Gwen on a marvellous write. Tell her if she would like to befriend me she may. 100/100 and going in my favorites Wonderful to read your work again Ashley! I missed your verse

[Dilan Gray]

You did so well! I love the poem, it is filled with so much emotion! Great job as always!

[cfix]

This is amazing!
I really enjoyed this write.

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Fantastic!!!!!

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Yet another twisted piece from Mr Black. Easily read and understood. I'm looking forwards to more.