Dream Me A Kiss

A short poem Expressing a kiss in a Dream

Dream Me A Kiss

 close your eyes feel me holding you

open your eyes see me in-front of you

close your eyes and feel my lips kiss you 

our perfect love warms my heart

hear me whisper I love you

open your eyes ...

I will be with you soon 

Author's Note

Dreaming of a kiss in a long distance relationship please give honest reviews

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Very interesting perspective. This is not something you read a lot.

[J. R.]

Tranquil and affectionate. Good work.

[northern monkey]

Serene, sublime, succinct simplicity. No need to say more.

[Poeticadia]

Well expressed! A poem that can simply be felt. I like the strength and purpose of that last line.

[howlfjdks]

I love this. Beautiful kindness.

[Dilan Gray]

I love this poem. I know the feeling of wanting to be near someone who is far away and trying with all your might to be able to feel them holding you even though you are seperated. Great job, I love the images. You really did well with this one!

[Frankie Nguyen]

I remember that's how I felt when I was in my long distance relationship. Love it.

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

This is so sweet. It's different from a lot of your other poems. But different in a good way. It shows a lighter side to your talent. I really like this.