He's there And I'm Coming

The second part to I know He's there

He’s There And I’m Coming

I know that slug is with you drooling with such lust

unable to penetrate you when we were together due to trust

Now I start my journey with blood boiling and intent

murder this sadistic slug so my anger I can vent 

I arrive at the door I see her stood behind

“go out through the back” to him she says

I’m not stupid I’m not blind 

I know he will be waiting until I go inside

why is she saving him? his best option is to hide

I want answers don’t give me lies

I stare with anger into her frightened eyes

I see into her eyes…….

I see into those deep blue eyes…….

those eyes which were once loving

 those eyes which once did care

F**k it get a grip you know he is right there

Pushing the door with such a force a shock upon his face

my fist connects with his jaw satisfied that I’ve put him in his place

I turn to leave when he shouts “She was great!” 

Now I see red he has sealed his fate 

I turn and thrust my knee to his face 

bludgeoning him 

His teeth are removed and iron he must taste 

I Lift his head by his hair as I throw a devilish right

blackening one eye impairing his sight 

She stands there and watches like she doesn’t even care

My damage is done her complexion so fair

“I’ve never seen you so violent” she says with detest

I turn to him stamping with full force on his chest

“You broke my heart and now I’ve caused you some pain”

deep in her mind she knows she is to blame

I look into those eyes and I really couldn’t care

I now don’t give a f**k if he is there   

Author's Note

The second part the not so fairytale ending come on i'm Ashley Black Not Ashley happily Ever After
please give honest reviews as always

Reviews

[A]

Well this was dark and it was very nicely written, it was very imagery and powerful description, well done

[Call Me Blu]

Darn, I always come to late to be original. lol. but I did enjoy this poem alot.

[shelbylugal]

I always love your writing! Even though I usually don't go for the dark stuff but I can always count on work like this to momentarily change my mind and make me like it:)

[Dilan Gray]

You wrote this really well. The images and descriptions were strong. Good job.

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

I love this. The anger and hate. The words used. The rhyming. Love it all.
I think I may have to favourite these. ^__^

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Ha! Awesome. Usually a girl like that will melt and want him back after showing force...then the guy can walk away with a really great feeling. Great job. I liked it.