Free me From My Invisible Chain

A poem About seeing the person you once loved with someone else

Free Me From My Invisible Chain

My eyes enraged as I see you passing

linking arms with whom was only a friend

don’t lie to me I know your heart

the true reason our relationship started to descend

As much as I hate you for what you have done

leaving me disconnected, lonesome, suicidal

My heart will belong to you always as you are my one

I used to smile every morning and before I went to bed

Treacherous lies breaking my heart

Now these times I truly dread 

Images like subliminal messages playing heart games

even viewing you with other people 

Won’t free me from my invisible chains

Remembering the good times In our loves embrace

Laughing, holding, Kissing,  

Now it pains me to see your face  

As you walk I feel it tugging causing me much pain

Tearing me from inside out 

This Relentless Invisible Chain

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews I feel this one weaker than my usual stuff Just feeling tired
Thanks for reading !!

Reviews

[Samantha (:]

Aww, man. You had to send me a read request to this today, didn't you! It relates to my day. ): But it was still a very enjoyable read. I like how you compared your longing and hurt from the past relationship to a chain. You want to break free and move on with your life, but the love of once was and what you wish could still be has consumed your life. 4th stanza is definitely my favorite. I'm not sure why you said this was so weak, it's one of the best poems I've read on here. Very easy to connect to, raw, and well written. (:

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

So painful and hurt. I felt this piece. Amazing as usual. (:

[Ashley Myers]

i feel the pain. this has happened to me and you hit the nail on the head

[Poeticadia]

A poem with a strong message and great last stanza. All your poems relay strong emotions we can relate to, but that some of us cannot always successfully write about ourselves.

[Dilan Gray]

I think just about everyone can relate to this, I love it! The images are great and I love the flow! It is not weaker! Great poem!

[jessica Wray]

U did every good and u r the best writer on here

[Jenny Nelson]

Well titled and a piece folks can identify with. Definitely relayed a strong emotion.

[Hello, Goodbye]

the painful feelings are realized in the intent of your words.. the angst is there and need for resolution and frustration in not receiving it.. the recurring message is useful and you do a good job of expressing the strain of such pain..