Slips,Trips and Polka Dot Shorts

The First escapade of Benny Tinkerbell

Trips, Slips And Polka Dot Shorts

Luck is gracious to people and makes your wallet swell 

but very unlike the others is Benny Tinkerbell

It started at age sixteen paying to lose his cherry

what could go wrong with her? 

she looked like Halle Berry

taken to a secluded bush he started to undress

not noticing Halle’s protruding apple 

or her lack of breast  

Pleasure was then given as he gazed into her eyes

feeling something poke his ankle belonging only to guys

Up in a flash, Benny tried to flee from Halle man

forgetting to pull up his polka dot shorts

his sudden dismay unravelling plan

Never again a woman 6ft4 he trust 

So pay Halle for pleasure although sickened he must

Author's Note

This was a challenge set by Gwen Goad to try and make her laugh I hope iv'e achieved my goal in this first instalment of a Character I hope to use more often

Reviews

[Dilan Gray]

I love this!!! It is so funny and you can imagine everything! You definitely met the challenge beautifully! I didn't know what to expect and this was just fantastic! I knew I would love it just by the title. Thank you so much for meeting the challenge with this result. I love the humor of it!

[northern monkey]

ooooo my days! The Dark Knight has written something funny! This made me splutter my tea with laughter. Smart move flagging reader's expectations with the title. Halle Berry's lawyer says see you in court. Benny Tinkerbell!? Can we expect Jiminy Cricket in future episodes? All power to your chuckle muscles!

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

This made me lol. I don't laugh often, so well done. (:
I look forward to the rest of Benny Tinkerbell's adventures.

[Caitlynxoxo]

I absolutely loved this, because you left me in hysterics while reading :) LOL great job. This was a very enjoyable read!!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Narnie]

I shall look forward to the adventures of Benny Tinkerbell. Poor old Halle Berry though! I admit she is probably more of a woman's woman than a man's man. Hmmmm. Haha...

[Poeticadia]

Still laughing... wonderfully put together... hope you'll be doing some more like this?!

[Ashley Myers]

Hahahahahha this was sooo funny lol!!!!!!

[Dische]

HAHAHAHA that was histericle

haha, this was hysterical. just fantastic. i love how you and gwen challenge each other to be better writters.