5am Issues

The way I spend my mornings...

I trudge grudgingly out of bed,
Longing for more sleep,
My hair is like a rat nest on my head,
But night's peace I cannot keep!

The TV remote I stumble for,
Blind, for there is no light,
And, if I were to turn on one,
It would be much too bright.

I sit on the couch,
longing for dreams,
Of flying elephants,
or lands of whipped cream.

Nothing's on but 5:00 news,
And I have no interest in THAT.
The only sound is silence,
Oh, wait, there's the meow of the beyotch cat.

Here comes Mum, groggy as can be,
"Kate, what are you doing?"
"Well, I'm awake."
She looks at me like I'm an idiot, "Well, I see you're not ASLEEP."

Why aren't I like any other child!?
For extra sleep I yearn,
Now I sit and watch TV,
Like any other Saturday morn.

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

I have to say one thing before I review, "OMG! YOU WAKE UP EARLY!!! I WOULD KILL SOMEONE WHO WOKE ME UP THAT EARLY!!"

Now for my review. Everything was very well written, so you caught my attention once more girlie! :)

~Lizzard~

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you get up waaaayyyy to early!!!!!!!!! my son is an early bird..can't wait until he sleeps in!!!

[Kes]

hmmm... Nice one.
I can relate! I hate waking up early!

[Taylor Ann]

Totally feel the same way. Nicley writen! :)

[Moflo]

Interesting poem. I think you can definitely add some length to it but otherwise the rhymes are really good.