Fire Girl

A blaze...

Her hair was long and flaming, purples and reds, oranges and yellows,

dancing before your very eyes.

Her lips wore a fiery smile, a red so beautiful, it was

the color of the rising sun.

Her eyes were the color of volcanic rock, and they always had

a spark of interest.

Her hands were delicate, caring for anything that needed care.

Her heart was warm, and loved everything. 

But then it was 

extinguished.

And so was her soul.

But Fire Girl blazes on.

Reviews

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strong and vivid..your writing is on fire :)

[nono]

This is interesting and the colors you use to describe it is awesome. I'm seeing very vivid images in my head of what it looks like. Nice job this is beautiful!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww you gave such a bright light to this girl.....only to be extingushed....such a shame but nice poem