The First

To plelitte, the first to encourage me to keep writing on here. To my family, to say, "You are so talented." And to My Writing Obsession for introducing me.

The first.

YOU were the first to say, "Keep going."

And, "You're great!"

YOU were the first apple off the tree, 

the first leaf to fall.

But you were also last.

The last I will forget.

The last to never say, "This isn't good."

Or, "I hate this."

You were the first.

Reviews

[Ashesh]

nice.. thanks for sharing.

[Steve]

This is very sweet....i have recieved encouragement like that too.....but its too bad that so few are good at giving it!! lol

I applaud you for so nicely putting this into words....

[Aven]

A very nice dedication, we all luv Plelitte :)

[Adelia Alighieri]

This is very nice, I'd like to read more from you. :)

[Marie Harrison]

Cool poem. I love the contrasting nature and the uplifting message. We all need more first times such as this one!

[Loner]

U sure have a talent K wonderful piece i loved it.
any idea where Plettlitte is ??? what happend i have come online after a month
she was a good friend of mine.

[Jenny Nelson]

Very nicely gets your message across. I do wish plelittle were still here on WC. I truly enjoyed reading her poems.

[dovetailer]

We all have something to say...
something we feel...
something we want to share with others...
so we write...
and write...
and write...
we all see life our own way...
have a unique perspective
to show the world
through our words we cause
to march across the page...
never be afraid to bleed...

[AileB.]

{K} this is perfect(:

[Chipgirl]

wow very cute