Daddy Are You Ok?

We left the last poem as Jessica said sweet dreams what happens next in the rag doll series?

Daddy Are You Ok?

How can such an innocent girl wish this doll sweet dreams?

the blackened heart of Casey will use a pillow to silent the screams,

but first there is the father this abusive child molester
acting like he is being innocent, sampling a tester. 
Not thinking of the mental damage he could possibly cause
thinking that because he is her father he isn't breaking any laws.
Casey may not understand but his penance will be be paid 
the rag doll free from his daughters grasp wielding her favoured blade.

Casey observes this sickening roach as he sniffs his fingers
the hand he placed upon his daughter a minor odour lingers 
the buttoned eyes have set there goal

the doll begins to increase pace
the father turns to see her running

disbelief upon his face

too much wine, a long day at work

that's what he believes is the cause
he looks again to see there's nothing there

and with laughter he roars 

Cold steel presses against his throat as his head is raised
the rag doll that stands above him is totally unfazed 
before the man can say a word or let out a single scream
the dolls stitched mouth begins to move and quietly says
"sweet dreams"

The knife slashes the throat with ease

as blood seeps out the wound,
the gargling of the fathers plea
he will take to his tomb. 

The man lay silently

as he reaches the final breath
a single tear rolls down his cheek

he knows he deserves this death
but as Casey wipes the knife against her laced topped socks 
arrives the next victim as the front door unlocks.

 

Author's Note

Sorry for such a long wait but I hope you think it's worth it

please review honestly and let me know who you think the next victim is?

thank you all so much for following this story

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

the simple rhyme and wording makes this a too creepy for children children's story.

[Arabdha]

Its eerie,creepy,gives me the shivers...there's something about the story that makes you look deeper..and think..and i like that ..so well done:)

[Katie]

*shudders* I love how wonderfully creepy this story is. I wonder, however, if its a bad thing I got a bit of a smile at the father being killed, perhaps not under the circumstances. I find this story incredibly compelling in many ways, and I look forward to your next instalment of it. The flow was excellent in this chapter, and although you changed the rhyming scheme part of the way in, it didn't break the flow at all for me, and I didn't even notice on my first read through of the poem. Excellent work!