Darkness Is As Clear As Daylight

Darkness Is As Clear As Daylight

A Poem by {A}shley {B}lack @-;-
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A Geeky Poem

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Darkness is as clear as daylight

My parents murdered in front of me
My life crashed to the ground
The murderer tried to end my life
But hurried away by the sirens sound

I became a recluse and started to train
Martial art expert numb to most pain
I’m a rich vigilante a shadow to you
Your worst enemy when my signal in view

Blackened with armour gadgets and cape
Gothem the city I’m beginning to shape
Scarecrows fear me, penguins submerge
Cats lose all nine lives and ivy does purge

Two faced people disagree with my benevolence
Riddled by my actions caused by my bane
Capturing the villains is a joke they are clearly insane

How this city has so many enemies
Freezes my brain
a league of justice created
And needs to remain
Men who are super
woman who are a wonder
They need to be quick as a flash
before Gothem goes under 
Daredevils
risk takers
battlers of crime
I will save this city it is my time

But why so serious? I hear you ask
Because this city needs someone
And I have a mask

only then will we have peace
A robin in view
I am Batman Who are you?

© 2011 {A}shley {B}lack @-;-


Author's Note

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
I had to do at least one comic book poem as they are something I enjoy reading and Batman being my favourite vigilante if I am to write one poem on this subject it had to be him

please give honest reviews as always

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Awesome! I love Batman, and this was a great tribute to him. One grammatical thing I noticed : woman who are a wonder. That should either be "women who are wonders" or woman who is a wonder.

Posted 11 Years Ago


deep

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it. My little brother loves batman. Nice job:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

God dam boy you came ready with this one
Your word play is like very skilled sword play
You leave samurais mouth open saying no f*****g way.
I like how you were able to fit Batman's life into a compact poem
Excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What I love about the different kinds of poetry that is available is the fact that you can just work and twist words in to creating something very different, but it also leaves that mark of originality to it. This is really great; I thought it was a bit strange at first, but when you really get into it, you find that this is really good stuff and really works well. Keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Don't laugh or be offended, but I've never read an Batman comics or what have you, but this poem is amazing, at any rate.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved the play on words. It was Batastic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Big comic book reader here.. geeking out on actually seeing a dark knight poem on here..haha.. great stuff man..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Being a comic book fan I love this, well done ; )

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow... by far the Best wordcrafting centered around the Dark Knight that I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I'd say "marvelous work" but it's DC delicious :o)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Sheriffhales, Shropshire , United Kingdom



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I Am Ashley Black (an alter ego ) I have a dark mind when it comes to my poetry as the strongest emotions come from negative RETURNING- I have been distant from this site for a while but I am fina.. more..

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