Why Whisper?

A poem Describing hurtful whispers

Why Whisper?

Being victim to such cruel stares
Eyes piercing the skin
jousting against my heart
Tearing me from within
 ripping me apart
Twisted and tormented
their lashing tongues
Twisting, tearing, thrusting
 whilst trusting
Each and every evil eventful lie
 envious from the start

Speak to me whilst splitting the truth
 S p I t t I n g
Your secretive vices

Why whisper when all you say
is all that has never been said

Author's Note

Something Different hope you like?

please give honest reviews as always

Reviews

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

People can hurt one's feelings so easily, i went through this, it's like its not enough having to go through the guilt of your mistake, you have to hear people spit venom against you. Giving you a harder time, looking at you as if you're the only bad thing, when at the time you need them more..
I really enjoyed reading this =)

[Call Me Blu]

Hmmm, your meaning wasn't as clear as some of your other poems but it was still very nice and poetic. I like how you played with the words to make them sound the way you wanted.

[Hello, Goodbye]

great expression here, great usage of imagery and brevity..

[Mark Daniels]

sounds a lot like my life.....

[Rose Masen]

Cruel and uncaring are most people. This piece captured a lot of emotion that people, with no feelings or care for others, perform in whispers- knowing whispers are more deeply scarring than screaming it aloud. Amazing write, love.

[Shardbearer99]

That's the thing about life. Anyone can hurt anyone's feelings. I had mine hurt plenty of times when I was in school; it was torture. And when you're a victim to bullying, you start to feel eyes staring at you, even if they aren't truly there. And I liked this part of your poem: "Being victim to such cruel stares Eyes piercing the skin" - There's just something so dark and sinister about that sentence. I loved it

[fernii]

Nice and different :) I like it

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the configuration of word twists is excellent~powerful and poignant~

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Amazing!
I love your new twist!
In fact i think i prefer this haha
101/100 :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well written sad and so true I think we have been through this at one time or another