Deal with It !

Deal with It !

A Poem by {A}shley {B}lack @-;-
"

A poem about annoying habits

"
Deal With It

Sorry do I depress you, embarrass you perhaps?
Do my clothes make you uncomfortable ?
Is my perspective on life causing you to relapse? 
do you see an ex do you hate my trend?
Is my outspoken nature driving you round the bend?
Is my voice annoying, do I make you itch?
Do you long to be rid of me unwanted like a stitch?

You may have finally realised your life I do not fit
but if you really love me I know you’ll deal with it 

© 2011 {A}shley {B}lack @-;-


Author's Note

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
A short poem about annoyances but realising when in love you will put up with anything
please give honest reviews as always

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I'm bi-polar...I need nothing to depress, excite or annoy me, I stay those ways. I'm outspoken to the umpteenth degree and to quote my daughter (a 26 year old journalist) I am, "painfully honest". Yeah, but clothes and hair and jewelry, piercings, tattoos and other outspoken personalities do not threaten me or make me uncomfortable in the least. I could hang out and drink beer with Marilyn Manson...or Charlie Manson...although I'd end up killing Charlie just for kicks. God knows somebody needs to. I don't see so much habit here as personality...or...in my case...personality disorder...I like disorder...hell, I like anarchy. I think realized is spelled with a z instead of an s. I like this piece...since there's always some kind of crap to deal with...love or not. And I have a great appreciation of individuality and the expression of it. Be you...you are the best you there is and nobody does it better. Thumbs up on this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

well said

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Your authors note said it all. "When in love you'll put up with anything". I'm only assuming, anyway, I've not experienced it. But an amazing write, none the less.

Posted 13 Years Ago


so true!!!! it dont matter what my friends like to do, who they want to be, blah blah blah, im still their friend regardless because i love them just the way they are

Posted 13 Years Ago


Perhaps they are mere tests to see if the love is truly strong.

Posted 13 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
A
That was really great. The message you're sending through this poem is very important I completely agree with what you're saying... If somebody loves you for real none of the things you mentioned above would matter because they love you for who you really are, extra-ordinary subject and great piece, keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its short. Its to the point, and it really is one hell of a write

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm bi-polar...I need nothing to depress, excite or annoy me, I stay those ways. I'm outspoken to the umpteenth degree and to quote my daughter (a 26 year old journalist) I am, "painfully honest". Yeah, but clothes and hair and jewelry, piercings, tattoos and other outspoken personalities do not threaten me or make me uncomfortable in the least. I could hang out and drink beer with Marilyn Manson...or Charlie Manson...although I'd end up killing Charlie just for kicks. God knows somebody needs to. I don't see so much habit here as personality...or...in my case...personality disorder...I like disorder...hell, I like anarchy. I think realized is spelled with a z instead of an s. I like this piece...since there's always some kind of crap to deal with...love or not. And I have a great appreciation of individuality and the expression of it. Be you...you are the best you there is and nobody does it better. Thumbs up on this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really like this poem!! i can relate to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha!yeah,right out there, no sugarcoating...good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really very good
Nice structure and repetition

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

329 Views
17 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on February 23, 2011
Last Updated on February 23, 2011

Author

{A}shley {B}lack @-;-
{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Sheriffhales, Shropshire , United Kingdom



About
I Am Ashley Black (an alter ego ) I have a dark mind when it comes to my poetry as the strongest emotions come from negative RETURNING- I have been distant from this site for a while but I am fina.. more..

Writing