I know He's there

A poem about finding out the truth

I Know He’s There 

We are at that place I wished we wouldn’t ever be

when we remain just friends our tie has been cut free

You tell me how we will still talk 

and meet up from time to time

but how many other ex’s have you fed this line

So we part ways and sure enough In contact we do stay

but then it starts being different our friendship it does fray

Messages are few and far between and this does frustrate

after breaking my heart I offer to you my friendship on a plate

How dare you toy with my emotions 

how dare you treat me this way

I’m giving you chance to remain a friend 

I’m owed an explanation and I think its time you pay

The message is replied and the truth soon does arise

“I have hurt you so much so I’m stopping with the lies”

Pain, Anger and Aggression

As I put my fist through the door

How could you string me along

you self-righteous f*****g w***e  

Ruby droplets stain my clothing 

 You crushed all my belief in you

 A lie right from the start

all the times you weren’t with me 

meeting him was your art 

So now I know what’s with the distance 

I laid my heart out bare

now cover it from you 

Because I know he’s there 

Now A choice I must make do I go around?

I’ll let you my readers decide where my feet are bound

Author's Note

This is a participation poem so you decide where I go with this I hope you like the first part please Give honest Reviews

Reviews

[Laura]

So descriptive, I can picture everything that's happening. You can really feel the emotion in this poem. Great!

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

I can really feel the emotion in this poem, it's very well done.

[TheFunkyCactus]

Incredible emotions, with a great Precision F-Strike in the middle. I think your poetry's improving a lot~ I really love the rhyme and flow of this one. Awesome!

[jessica Wray]

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[trainwreck]

This is really good. I think it would be cool to throw in some other guy, and perhaps another ex. Anyway, its a nice poem with a good level of tension.

[howlfjdks]

Forgiveness. Acceptance of what we can't control; people.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

very powerful,and charged throughout with emotion...the bitterness and regret are brought out wonderfully. powerfully emotive piece.

[Arabdha]

"How could you string me along
you self-righteous f*****g w***e " strong emotions..and written straight from the heart..there are times when we go through a really tough phase and put it down in poetry..I can say this is one of those..

[Jonathan]

Very strong poem and a strong statement being made
your a good writer and your little by little winning me over
As a fan. I hope you keep up the good work.

[Samantha (:]

You can tell this is from the heart. That's always hard, the friendship after the break up. Especially if you still have feelings for the other person. :/