The Passion

A poem Which describes A once strong love which has ended but still allows a rendezvous of lust in secret

The Passion 

They gaze into each others eyes knowing the love the flame the unrelenting lustful pain tears through their hearts the unconditional un-separating overwhelming transition of lustful greed and heartache through their pleasurable embrace to their public distance 

eyes are ever so striking frightened that the observation of a stranger may be able to uncover the burning desire of the souls linking arms when hands remain cold fingers tremble as the eyes rarely meet wanting to turn that vision of beauty and forget about these cattle of strangers wasting money on materialistic items of unimportance the only thing that remains true and worth fighting for is that moment 

knowing that initial lean in will provide the answer rejection like the familiarization of an unwanted cancer the hidden catacomb to which the pleasure will only exist hidden from the world the cattle the haunting eyes and that stranger who may know the secret lustful activities 

time keeps passing and a certainty remains the future that a heart yearns can only be treasured when it is within that moment of passion 

Author's Note

This poem is set within a persons mind how can a love so pure be kept secret and why does love have to end and remain hidden from onlookers these are my thoughts when writing this poem

Reviews

[Red]

I remember how this feels, I interpreted it different than you meant? or maybe I am spot on. But I guess that's the magic of it, really. Well I don''t think you could've conveyed this moment any more perfectly, I've tried it myself and failed. So good job, and thank you, you did wonderful.

[Dische]

Another good write by you, your poems are always what I turn to when looking for good poetry

[Frankie Nguyen]

you really are talented (:

[Jenny Nelson]

Wondering if the person in the story is confusing love and its committment with lust. Enjoyable piece and for sure thought provoking. Well done.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

your so talented I love your work more and more

[steph]

This poem, as usual has all the technical stuff, its deep, but it lacks depth in my oppinion. It needs just a little more volume, a little more passion, I want to feel the ferver, the pain, the desire, the lust.. it just seems a bit empty... All together though, the poem is well writen.

[Caitlynxoxo]

I absolutely loved this poem, because the words gave such power to the emotion conveyed. It was all very well done, and very moving :) thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Cherrie Palmer]

The people we meet along life’s way color us, form us, and make us more. Good or bad we can build from it and learn from it. Love given freely is never lost. Great poem

[Dilan Gray]

I love this poem, it is really well done and as Red said below, you conveyed everything really well. Like I've said in other reviews, you make the images appear so well! You are great at writing poems!

i really enjoyed this though i wish it were longer. i really could feel the emotions in it. i am yet again amazed by your talent.