Cant you see?

......For her again.....

I honestly think

Your the one

Thats making me weak

 

I'm falling for you

My bestfriend.

 

I've known you

Only a couple weeks

And already

You make me nervous to speak.

 

Your in a relationship

And its killing me.

 

I'm falling for you

Can't you see?

 

Cant you see

That your the only thing

That makes it hard for me to think?

 

Cant you see?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Decdreams87]

this is simplistically touching. capturing. I would only suggest you check grammar and expand from there

[Daytonight]

This is very relatable. Well done. Keep up the good work.

[J.]

I honestly like it. Its nice.... um.... Some of its awkward and not in the areas where it should be....

[Moivan Smith]

easy read, can definitely feel the stress and angst of being in such a frustrating situation.

[Ryzo]

Great read, well conveyed. I think you should try ignore your feelings, it'll pass. considering the guy is in a relationship as well. Things could get messy.

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely done. I really enjoyed this read.

[Saya666]

Make one for her!

[Silent Knight]

Very nice! I know this feeling well, and I can relate.

[stars are far]

This is sooooooooooo nice
i enjoyed that :)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

A friend falling for a friend...a sad conquest I must say. This poem is simple but it describes the everyday feelings that keep accumulating within someone's heart and then that friendship line becomes thinner. This is good work.