Amanda...

Amanda...

A Chapter by Samantha Heaton

"What the f**k do you think your doing!" "Mom let go of me" "Get your a*s in this house right now!" (Sam was pulled into her room by her mom). "Mom
calm down!" (Sams mom gets in sams face) "Where were you gonna go!" "Just on a walk" (Mom takes Sam by the shoulders and pushes her against the
wall) "Dont f*****g lie to me! Where were you gonna go?!" "With Zac" "You were gonna go with him!" "yes mom" (Mom lets go of Sam). "I have just the
right mind not to beat the s**t out of you!!" (Sam feeling paralized just stands there). "You know Sam, Your the biggest dissapoinment for a kid" "Thanks
mom I appricate it" (Mom opens Sams door and leaves). Sam walks to the other side of the room and sits on her bed, And then all of a sudden hears her
ringtone "Marry me today and everyday, Marry me if I ever get the nerve to say hello in this cafe, Say you will mhhmmm say you will" (It was from Zac)
"I'm still in the driveway, I heard her yelling, I couldnt see you with that tree there, Are you okay!?" "Ugh, I'm fine give me a minute I have to go to the
bathroom" "Okay take your time". Sam walks to her door praying her mom is in the living room, She opens the door and sees she isnt in her room so Sam
goes into the bathroom to look at what her mom did. "wow its actrully bleeding, Her ring must of got me, Whats Zac gonna say? I mean he knows what
my mom does so he'll know she did it, Oh well he can keep a secret, Let me just grab a bandaid and head out". Sam heads for her room and this time
she was able to get out of her window without getting caught. (Sam opens door) "Sam what happend?" (Zac lightly grabs Sams face and turns it to get
a better look) "Did your mom do that?!" "Zac its okay, Im fine now, Can we just go?" "Of coarse, If I could of saw her doing that to you I would of" "Zac
stop Im okay now, Im with you!" "Sam im sorry" " Dont be it wasnt your fault". (Zac puts his hand on Sams). (Sam sees a girl from the corner of her eye)
"Zac pull over!" "why?" "Pull over!" "Okay?" (Zac pulls over) "Did you see her??" "See who!" "The girl!" "Sam?" "Zac I saw her, She had Black hair, and was
kinda pale!" "Sam did you take you Meds?" (Sam stood there thinking) "No I forgot to, But I know I saw her!" "Sam lets get back in the car." "Okay" (Sam
and Zac open the car doors and get in) "Babe lay your head down" "I dont want to" "Okay, We're almost there i'll pay" "Okay good I kinda forgot my
money" "haha, You stay here i'll be right back" "Okay...". (Sam turns the radio on and stares out the window looking for what she saw in the corner of her
eye) "I guess it was just because I hav'nt took my medication" (Sam closes her eyes but when she opens them she see's what she saw about half a mile
ago) This girl had beuatiul green eyes, With lared black hair she had a Black Veil Brides T-Shirt on with blue Jeans that had holes around the knees. "Who
are you? Asked Sam" The girl replied "Amanda".


© 2011 Samantha Heaton


Author's Note

Samantha Heaton
Finshed Chapter 2 and have so many ideas for Chapter 3 enjoyz

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I'd put on a mature rating with the swearing - just to be safe.

Otherwise, a great piece, very interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A wild chapter. A conversation that went in many directions. Need to remember to add description of people and area to make them come alive for the reader. A very good chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


No mother should ever tell her child that! Really good story! Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That was cool! I would like to know who this Amanda is......

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this! Tell we when theres more! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh my gosh i loved it i was totally into it! haha can't wait to read more ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Contiuned so well, the arguments and moms living up to her reputation:)

Yas

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow that was intense. Very interesting, and i'd love to read more once you have it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
Intense! What a crazy confrontation that was

Posted 13 Years Ago



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