Place called earth

I got this idea when I was in a bad place in life...

On the outside

Is smiles but

Inside I am crying

I might look happy

But inside I am dying

The hurt is unbearable

The pain is worse

Sometimes I cant help

To think

How would it be

If I wernt here

On this place called Earth

Would I actrully

Have people who cared?

How im treated

Just kills me inside

It makes me

Wanna pick up my knife

And just slit my wrist

Leave this world

And the abuse

That came with it

Would I be more happy in hell

Cause thats where im going

If I commit suicide

I just dont no

All I no is

I dont like this

Place called Earth...

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammer....

Reviews

[Moivan Smith]

On the outside
Is smiles but
Inside I am crying
I might look happy
But inside I am dying

I like how easy it is to relate to this. Very good.

[CreativePsycho]

This is a really good poem I can feel the pain

[Daytonight]

This is well written but very sad and intense. Also full of emotion and pain. I can relate to this. Keep searching for another way out. Keep on penning.

[CharlesMonroe]

Very powerful and very emotional. But I don't want you to go, if you go, I go (:

[Eile MacIntyre]

It has a nice flow. A very emotional poem. You convey sadness well in it. I like the title and how it's repeated. A place called earth. :)