Too Late For The Last Train Home

Too Late For The Last Train Home

A Poem by sivan
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Tighter chains is what i desire,

combined with spikes cutting into my flesh every time I move

so as to remind me that I can't reach you...

Can't reach out to you

anymore.

 

Stop

and take a step back-

Observe this new reality

and numb sensations

masked by false calmness indicating

anger in the backlines of an ocean of emotion.

And a smile is not a hard thing to fake.

 

Oscar winning actress,

playing the role of someone, not myself,

convincingly enough to fool the masses.

Now raise your glasses

i think,

another drink is in order.

 

A cocktail of feelings

hiding true ingredients of pain

of rage

and of soulless ambition

to be something more

than this missed opportunity

For Love...

© 2011 sivan


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i like what you're implying here, it reminds me a lot of Demi Lavoto's new song skyscraper. good job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 26, 2011
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sivan
sivan

Durban, South Africa



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I am a student of computer engineering... very technical yes but i like to get lost in the creativity of poetry and writing. Im an out and proud lesbian and if anyone doesn't like that well then that .. more..

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