Song To Say Goodbye

Song To Say Goodbye

A Poem by sivan
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'Dance with me oh baby'

the song plays my body's aching

i see you fighting your own deamons

your attempts to ignore my chasing

wearing you out

your hair slightly disshevelled

your skin a blushing tone

and i am standing fully composed.

this gets to you

torments your thoughts

so that you must turn your head

so that your eyes may embrace

another scene

but even with the new surroundings

im in your thoughts

you still feel me.

and so you turn and walk away

try and find an empty place

with so much left to say

 

One look, a silent invitation

i know this

my cue

to follow you.

You are waiting

He doesn't mind, you told him you'd be with me

There's no room for suspicion

afterall we're both girls

i hesitate perhaps to torture you

or perhaps im just tired of secrets

its not only you who's carrying a load

so i make my way to you

unwillingly

familiarly driven by the need to have you close

feel you breathing

feel you needing me

 

you call me over

tears in your eyes

its my weakness, you know

we kiss for just a second

this the final goodbye

i pull myself away with a strength

i've been building from the start

i ask only that you make a choice

and then i hear your breaking heart

 

© 2011 sivan


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Added on September 25, 2011
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sivan
sivan

Durban, South Africa



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I am a student of computer engineering... very technical yes but i like to get lost in the creativity of poetry and writing. Im an out and proud lesbian and if anyone doesn't like that well then that .. more..

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