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About MeSometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate?
I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have written. I get requests from people I have not reviewed or vice-versa. I don't want to clog up friends with some who only want reviews.. but if you review my writing I am always happy to read yours and review. Would you all send your read requests by pm , please. I turned the read request off but will read if you let me know . i enjoy reading here.. and everywhere.. I have had stories in my head since I was a wee lass lying in bed they would come, but in the morning they were dead.. I love to write, too bad I can't! I just throw my thoughts out there, here, wherever. I like writing stories or poetry with a message.. something the reader can think on. I love music, of course it is poetry too , oh, and you can dance to it! I am an advocate for children, animals, veterans, homeless.. I think America is ready for a revolution. I believe in peace and love and putting myself in others shoes before I make a judgment! There by the grace of God go I... Although my heart and spirit is light I also have a dark side of the heart.... I love words and my favorite color is purple. Violet and ultraviolet are nice words. Ointment , weird word. Love, great word, perhaps slightly overused... I am not a good writer and I can take constructive criticism and even just an I don't care for this poem. Say what you truly think. I would appreciate your honesty. Peace , Love a few of the things I love also babies animals people sun moon stars oceans purple Holy One Music Donovan Chocolate All of you Lets101 Quizzes - Fun Quiz Lets101 Quizzes - Fun Quizzes Please join our group if you like .. I try to make it interesting , 'try'... many very good writers to read and learn from ..
Look and Listen it is beautiful... Arkansas Traveler (a violet love ointment) by Gomer Le Poet.. thank you for writing this sweet poem for me, David :) I wanted to write a thank you note to my friend with a golden heart her words and passion for this world retold by me are only a feeble start with skilled pen she writes with wit she writes with love for all stories of ancient fabled worlds and cries for political balls she wants a revolution not a battle of knives or guns there seems to be room inside her heart for all forgotten ones music is her language across the universe she reaches out her hand to touch us with every verse the civil war makes her sad as it should be for all there is no understanding of this wasteful wounded fall my reaching out and thanking her is just a word of pleasure for all the great things she has said her words I'll allways treasure Gomer LePoet.. Talking About New Orleans by Jayne Cortez Talking about New Orleans About deforestation & the flood of vodun paraphernalia the Congo line losing its Congo the funeral bands losing their funding the killer winds humming intertribal warfare hums into two storm-surges touching down tonguing the ground three thousand times in a circle of grief four thousand times on a levee of lips five thousand times between a fema of fangs everything fiendish, fetid, funky, swollen, overheated and splashed with blood & guts & drops of urinated gin in syncopation with me riding through on a refrigerator covered with asphalt chips with pieces of ragtime music charts torn photo mug shots & pulverized turtle shells from Biloxi me bumping against a million-dollar oil rig me in a ghost town floating on a river on top of a river me with a hundred ton of crab legs and no evacuation plan me in a battered tree barking & howling with abandoned dogs my cheeks stained with dried suicide kisses my isolation rising with a rainbow of human corpse & fecal rat bones where is that fire chief in his big hat where are the f*****g pumps the rescue boats & the famous coalition of bullhorns calling out names hey I want my red life jacket now & I need some sacred sandbags some fix-the-levee-powder some blood-pressure-support-juice some get-it-together-dust some lucky-rooftop-charms & some magic-helicopter-blades I'm not prepared to live on the bottom of the water like Oshun I don't have a house built on stilts I can't cross the sea like Olokun I'm not equipped to walk on water like Marie Laveau or swim away from a Titanic situation like Mr. Shine Send in those paddling engineers I'm inside of my insides & I need to distinguish between the nightmare, the mirage, the dream and the hallucination Give me statistics how many residents died while waiting how many drowned how many suffocated how many were dehydrated how many were separated how many are missing how many had babies and anyway who's in charge of this confusion this gulf coast engulfment this displacement this superdome shelter this stench of stank this demolition order this crowded convention center chaos making me crave solitary confinement Am I on my own exhausted from fighting racist policies exhausted from fighting off sex offenders exhausted from fighting for cots for tents for trailers for a way out of this anxiety this fear this emptiness this avoidance this unequal opportunity world of disappointments accumulating in my undocumented eye of no return tickets Is this freedom is this global warming is this the new identity me riding on a refrigerator through contaminated debris talking to no one in particular about a storm that became a hurricane & a hurricane that got violent and started eyeballing & whistling & stretching toward a category three domination that caught me in the numbness of my own consciousness unprepared, unprotected and made more vulnerable to destabilization by the corporate installation of human greed, human poverty human invention of racism & human neglect of the environment I mean even Buddy Bolden came back to say move to higher ground because a hurricane will not rearrange its creativity for you & the river will meet the ocean in the lake of your flesh again so move to higher ground and let your jungle find its new defense let the smell of your wisdom restore the power of pure air & let your intoxicated shoreline rumble above & beyond the water-marks of disaster I'm speaking of New Orleans of deportation of belching bulldozers of poisonous snakes of bruised bodies of instability and madness mechanism of indifference and process of elimination I'm talking about transformation about death re-entering life with Bonne chance, bon ton roulé, bonjour & bonne vie in New Orleans, bon FLOWERS by Fabian G. Franklin Among the stones on windswept rim A fragile flower grew Painted like dainty butterfly wing Drinking the morning dew Gossamer tendrils stretch from birth Beneath the arid ground Seeking sustenance from the earth Moving without a sound Through the gray-green filaments Blood of ages pass Dazzling colors and nutrients That spill in bloom at last We are become much like the plant Among the sand and stone Who by survival must supplant Infertile flesh and bone And let the spirit’s winding roots Sink deep into the soil Producing green and vibrant shoots That stretch through time and toil Then our soul’s true colors seen Among the brittle clay Might be a fit bright offering In heaven’s rich bouquet © 2010 Fabian G. Franklin AMERICA.. by Robert Luna What happen to America The land of the free, and the home of the brave Now the unmarked grave of the word HOPE This is not my America The land in which the brave become the homeless and We the People become a country of passive prey Playing the part of a victim in a tragedy that we helped write We have no one else to blame and no where else to turn Allowing our so called government to turn a deaf ear to our cries As we say no more NO MORE As we scream it from the roof tops to the dirty pavement that lays crumbling beneath our feet We The People are America I am America You are America WE are America My brothers and sisters This is a cry to every woman, man, and child Take up your weapons because the war has begun Do you not have a voice Allow it to be heard Sharpen your tongue so your words may strike fear let them know We have had enough Stop talking about United We Stand For we can not stand united if we allow fear to hold us in place We must march bear the burden of the unknown We the People are the future All rest upon our thick heavy shoulders as we seize a new world and refresh the spirit of America Give the youth an understanding They are not entitle to anything that they themselves are not willing to fight for It seems the words remain unspoken provoking a change That is why I continue to try to set this right We are in the middle of a fight it’s for our very lives and We the People can no longer stand on the side lines Hoping and praying this will pass in time The time is now We must some how find a way to make a change before it is to late So ask yourself What happened to our beloved America The land where your freedom is for sale to the highest bidder And the home of the braveless that would not stand up to fight We must carry on and go forth We the People We must march Bear the danger of uncertain as it all rest upon us and the choices we make We the People must take upon the task to make a change take place and we can not give up without a fight The time is now stand stand up and be counted as one of We the People And let your voice be heard © 2009 Robert Luna Comments
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