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as i raise my blade up to her neck she begins to dance the jig of deth again and again i thrust my blade deep and gide her into eternal sleep her ..

enslavedby a demon from the rage i possess a black tainted heart wich beets in my chest within thees evil thoughts my humanity is lost unleashing ..

my rage it sters like a wild beast unpredictable reddy to be unleashed at the drop of a pin unstableat anny piont in time i could be lost consumed ..

based on the strugles of my brother to adapt to home life after going through hell in iraq though the detales are for the most part fiction

writen for a contest about jak the ripper

unedited

brains befor bullets a friend of mine once sed life is much more peacefull when u simply use your head brains befor bullets it makes sence to me ..

not tweeked all the way yet

i thought this might be a cool litle monalog for a grafic novle im working on

i feel it needs more yet i dont yet know what to add