Ed, nope I know! Quite different, from anything I normally write but I was triggered; and had to try and see if I could. Never written a story before, never an erotic one, and never anything about a Submission so it was quite the task, but it seems I did something right with it! Thank you for your comment. Made me smile and feel proud!
"Purpose" is one of my own personal favorites though, and I am thankful that you can appreciate it as well!
That's how we learn, Edward. We try...and try again. The problem here at the cafe is that all too often readers hesitate to tell you what your mistakes are. I can only suggest that you do a little research and check it out; but what I told you is pretty basic. Glad you saw the humor in it. Have a great day.