Thank you for the helpful suggestions. But, sorry, Troy has to be gentle, and he has to die. I'm actually writing a prequel to it that will explain the circumstances of the story. So hey. Let's see where that goes. Thanks again :)
Actually, I was thinking of deleting all the pictures. I sternly believe a good writing can do without a picture ;) (Words can certainly do better than a picture)
Thanks for the review on The Orphan's Pet. Two or three people were saying that they heard a similar story somewhere, but wasn't about a dog, or something like that. I've been trying to figure that out. I really don't wanna be a plagiarist :|
Thanks for the review. I wish I could abide your request, but I should've written it when I was in the 'Abandoned temple' mood. It's lost far beneath. Anyways, thanks again :)
Alright, so I rewrote the whole story and I think it has a good thing going. I revealed how Anna forgot so easily. If you'd like to go back and take a look, feel free. :D