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my nigthmare comes true all the things i did for this not to happen was all the things i did to make it happen my daughter doesn't love me oh ..

Some of you will get it most of you won't. Just my observations of life's inequities.

this is a beginning thought I am looking for critiques

what would you have done?

A short short.

I TOOK MY GLASSES OFF SO THAT I COULD SEE CLEARLY NOT SOME ARTIFICIALLY ENHANCED MECHANICAL DEVICE THAT DISTORTS REALITY MY PERCEPTION OF REAL..

i'm in love with a woman that can't see but not blind maybe not love but obsessed at night she invades my thoughts in the daytime i see h..

I i have graduated to the next level i cut the journey short love hurts tie me cut me beat me now so when your gone so will the hurt ..

i paint a picture no one sees i stare at methe painting i created reds and purples black faces no one sees i paint a picture no one see..

i painted a painting and this is what i see for now.