Thank you for the review. Yes...it was a true story that happened to me. I get that weird situation stuff happening to me occasionally. It makes life interesting.
You are absolutely right, it's all too easy. I plan on coming back and reworking most of my stories to make them more ... i don't know ... "grown-up" I guess. For now, though, I am happy with the way they are. :)
How is the transition from Editor to Author coming for you?
Well, it may seem blunt, howevre, the editor can understand it. I am just trying to search a child within the modern person, making of the poet a child for a day. It needs lots of work and improvement, and good wishes from people like you. Thanks!