Dont know if you are still on here. I came back after nearly two years of not using this thing and read some of your comments on my novel. You know I never continued the story. I actually lost it all. I forgot that I had it saved digitally. now that I understand my writing voice much more clearly after all this time I'd like to pick it up again. I found your comments so genuinely helpful and wanted to thank you for the time you put into it. When I was 18(im 21 now) I couldnt appreciate this properly because of lack of understanding or maturity. Anyway, thanks again. I will be following up your comments with a rewrite of what I have, plus additions(more chapters yay!). Be blessed. I hope you get this.