Ara Kayman

Posted 17 Years Ago

I am glad that you gave that piece your time in reading. I appreciate you and your review. I hope you have wonderful weekend

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks for your review of Part 3.......Part 4 is the ending...i already have the ending in my head...... but Im not gonna type it now...maybe next week or August :D

Posted 17 Years Ago

hahhaha thanks for your review of "A DAY IN THE LIFE OF GIRL PART 2"
Part 3 is coming soon................and its gonna be more sex, more cursing, more drugs, and more abortions!!!!! everything that the story got criticised for.....I'm gonna extra more..... just like how it Part 1, people complained I have too many "f***s" in the dialoug in the first paragraphs...so I added extra more ''f***s' and 's***s' in Part 2 :D have a nice day

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanx for reviewing My Side-ch2, thanx for taking the time to read it hun, much appreiciated XX

Posted 17 Years Ago

wait till u read Part 3.....its gonna shock u

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hi Ara....... Im not gonna tell u what was the reason why I wrote "A Day In the Life of Man Part 1" yet....until you read Part 2 and 3 then I will tell u what is the meaning behind it......and can u believe that Part 1 got a Featured..now that even makes it crazier

Posted 17 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it but, if you don't mind me asking, what could I do to improve? I know it needs work, I'm just not sure what should be done with it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Bad A*S review on "I Adore Thee." Exactly what I would have said. I would also add that the "thee" is a poetic trap... out-moded language used simply to give the piece a "poetic" feel to it. Crap. Thought I'd let you know how f*****g refreshing it is to see an honest, well-formed review.

Posted 17 Years Ago

well thank you for your review, and for your approval ^.~

Posted 17 Years Ago

Yeah, your welcome. And if thats the way you feel, then you shouldn't change it. Maybe the way you feel calls for words like that. But all in all, that poem was amazing!