R. G. Murphy

R. G. Murphy

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About Me

For years now I have been a story teller, joke teller, heck I have even been a bank teller. Seriously I have always had lots of "stuff" rolling around loose in my head. Marbles, screws and even some clever words. I recently started to write them down to help eliminate the bits of monologue that have me dubbed as odd by some. Basically writing is therapeutic.


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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thank you R. G. for your honest review of "The Hormone House." I know that each of us, if able to take constructive feedback, will grow and only get better at our writing. As I said in my "About Me" section, I am a novice writer. Because I am learning, I will never improve without honest feedback. I promise I won't whine or cry. I choose to take in stride what you have said and learn from it! Keep them coming. Thank you again.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


favor: point out a piece where you found the ellipsis distracting so i can look at it with fresh eyes

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Posted 17 Years Ago


thanks for the review...

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thnaks for the review. I know that everyones life is littered with both good and bad choices. But just as the road of one thousand miles starts with one step. One choice can lead to another and then another etc. etc.
My own journey into addiction and homlessness started with that first bad egocentric self-satisfying choice. Since I've come into recovery one of the things I tell people is " The life you live is based on the decisions you make" or in other words how you react to life.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Now that I rule the world do you have any requests? You can have a position in my new government if you wish....
Oh wait. When I rule the world there is no government, just a one woman tyranny!
Life is about to get very good.
;o)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the review R.G.! Can't wait to explore your world of writing. Wish me stirring thoughts ;-)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thankyou for the reviews! I appreciate you taking the time to wade through my writings - I am hoping to be able to return the favor this afternoon (or if procrastination gets the best of me I might be reading them all right now!)

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Posted 17 Years Ago


I posted the rant thinking that people would be civil about the way they saw the work. This is a writing site. Wherein you are expected to review writing.

Not the person's character.

Whatever your feelings are about me, keep them to yourself. Do not personally attack me, thinking you are giving me constructive comments on my writing.

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Doesn't anyone know the meaning behind a rant? Seriously. You're like the fourth person who's come to my rant, and judged me upon it. You're right, you have absolutely no idea whats going on or anything about me. My friend of seven years was the person I was talking about. You know nothing about her, who she is, or what she does. All this frustration is built up over seven years. And I think I'm allowed to say what I wish about it.

You have no right to judge me based upon an angry rant. A rant. Look it up before passing judgement so easily. I never asked for it anyway.

That also, comes with maturity.
Mel

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Posted 17 Years Ago


Thanks for the review... initially i thought that this was good for effect..but now not so sure anymore....I will have to rewrite that last stanza at some point. Thanks again for the constructive crit...