Tim Jousma

Hi. I'm an author looking for some feedback. Too often I find myself unable to find people who either want or have the time to review my work. Thanks to a tip from a friend at work I thought I'd try this site out. What I'm looking for is that extra part of my writing that I'm not seeing that is preventing me from getting to the next level. So any useful criticisms will be appreciated. (You suck doesn't count as useful...lol)