Andrea Schreffler

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myspace.com/andischreff
San Francisco, CA
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About Me

I've been around for 20 years, currently drifting through the streets of San Francisco and the surrounding area. Things to get done: become published, buy really expensive and unnecessary shoes, wear them once, give them to a homeless woman.

And also: isn't it sad that we all think we're writers?

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Alessander

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks for the read. I'm glad you enjoyed, "Xlove with a shotgun" - It was a purely stream of thought poem, so when I posted it up, it very much surprised me how many people actually liked it. I figured most readers would be frustrated and just walk away. I guess there's something raw and pure about it. Amazing what our "subconcious" has swimming around in it. You should try it one of these days. Just put a pen to paper when inspired, and don't stop writing till the "high" goes away. Makeup your mind b4hand as to NO edititing or rewriting period. Anyhow, hope all is well my fellow artist;)

Ashly Christen

Posted 17 Years Ago

heyheyhey
smile :D
hehe
♥

Alessander

Posted 17 Years Ago

if i cut myself open,
i wouldn't find the guts
to break
my lines
the way you do.

reven your reviews are poetic:) thanks for the read.

Posted 17 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing my poem, i feel like a lame a*s for saying that, not for giving thanks though, just for those words. the poem was about...my lib and conservative side. I'm really conservative right now, and i am tired of hearing civil rights lectures. i want to throw up. all i'd really like to do is smoke cigarettes, write, and think about gory violent stuff. immature? maybe...but i dont' care.

Caroline Contillo

Posted 17 Years Ago

whoa, thanks for turning me on to christine hume. this stuff is out of control awesome.

Doug Case

Posted 17 Years Ago

Do you like San Francisco? It's on my list of places to go.

Welcome.

Alessander

Posted 17 Years Ago

wow, I'm the first comment? I guess I have to say something profound - hello. Glad you found the review helpful, like I said, just minor details. That it's more imagistic than biographical is refreshing since a lot of poems now adays are purely confessional, so thank you for showing it can be done differently. And don't worry too much about giving great insightful reviews, a lot of the reviews here are mainly reader response type stuff, with a few neuorotic critics like me:)

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