Okay! I haven't worked on my novel in months.. so this is FAR overdue, but this is the most revised version of the first chapter and I would LOVE cons..
This is the first novel I have ever began so its fairly intimidating, but I would absolutely love any constructive criticism! Especially about things ..
I see so many people with low self esteem due to societal standards..thats crazy. And unhealthy. This was just a quick little piece about organic beau..