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movies and throwing up ;D have fun :)

a boring day till Iocus sees his father doing something odd with the dinner

Iocus has a weird dream (nothing perverted unless ur sick like that) the goes to the mall with jane and meets her Ex

Jane's X shows up and their dancing in the rain and more kissing! :D

many skeletons from Jane's past are revealed

Jane tells Iocus horrible things she's done and how terrible she feels about it warning there is talk of suicide

Iocus' world crumbles when he finds out the horrible truth

read just the "I am" lines first then read only the lines after "I am" it sounds cool then read it as one :)

I was thinking of hey jude when I was writing this so it sort of has the same tempo

IDK what it's about but it's random hope u like :) (and their just making out and he ends up hurting her that's it ,it's nothing dirty)