. you're very welcome ... i plan to read more of you ... thanks for the review ... i have other writes ... but they play hide and seek ... more hide than seek ... lol ... :D ... but you'll see more soon ... :) ...
well that was sort of the effect I was going for. but not 100% lol. that poem has alot of comparisons in it. Ill try to explain sometime. haha I know its only four lines but I could write paragraphs about what it means.