Gabriel's Last Breath (band)

Airforce/Marine Corps Vet. First time submitting things that i write. Mostly i am a songwriter, but i have articles that I blab about, and people always tell me to submit them. I also added a small amount of my "lyrics", as poetry--as it can be--but i'm very interested in what people think about my story nonsense. Sometimes my Marine Corps roots hangs me by my language so i apologize in advance. It just seems to me like a big naughty word captures the soul sometimes...