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There are days you wish you could go back and change, but these are the days that define who w..
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Her blue eyes sparkle with a hint of mischief. Her smile radiates throughout the whole room. Her dimples are ever present on her cheek. When sh..
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Friday, August 4, 2006 4:45am, my alarm blares on pulling me from my restless slumber. Ugh. I love mornings, but not when I went to bed at three. Begr..
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I began my shift by washing my hands and getting 12 pots of coffee started - three coffee pots at a time. I filled the nine warming crafts we had and ..
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By the time I had regained my composure and made my way back out to the floor, Bertie had closed the bar down, and we were in full swing; every table ..
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"You can't just take us. It's kidnapping. At least on three accounts. I'm the only one who is 18. I'm just an abduction," Ryan announced from the seat..
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Sometimes you have to backtrack to fill in the gaps and create a more rounded story. Point of view change. Annette's story does not move forward. Ther..
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I felt like bricks were slowly being removed from my body, one by one. I shook my head and concluded I was no longer sitting up. I tried to move my li..
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~Abuse warning. Explicit wording~
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~Abuse warning. Explicit words (some, not much)~
POV change, backtracking, new information. DOES NOT EXPAND ON ANNETTE'S STORY
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