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You’re my Wizard of Oz. I’ve sat watching those Black and whites Wide-eyed until now. Now! Now there’s color! You teased ..

There’s a sand glaze On the white bare feet Walking down Stinson Beach. Your hand is warm in mine As a cold salt water Inches up to us. ..

Frozen brown grass is still To the wind that whistles Past my cracked window. Grandpa’s desk was moved Three weeks back. I needed life in..

And I’ll take you To northern Sweden Where the sun Barely teases us Over the distant mountains With glows of orange. I’ll take y..

Let this weekend come. We’ll be like monks In a French monastery, Silent. We’ll expose bare walls And unplug cords, Crawl into bed..

Chapter One Audrey with a Pierced Lip “I wish you could put your ear up to my heart And hear how much I love you” – Mineral ..

And I listen to French cabaret At 1am. I see her picture And need Edith Piaf. Somehow I’m closer to her With La Vie En Rose and Milord. ..

She’s filmed in 8mm. It’s the inches From a white medicine cabinet mirror That makes me click it on. Cat eyes finished And streaked..

It’s cold outside with a sky The color of a filled ashtray. This autumn has started With big rain drops That fall like spilled coins. Qui..

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