Lolo K : Writing

Chapter 2 - Excitement

Chapter 2 - Excitement

A Chapter by Lolo K


this is really short, just telling the readers a little more on Laurens personality
Chapter 3 - Bliss

Chapter 3 - Bliss

A Chapter by Lolo K


this is another short chapter where it just shows how the characters are living a good life in bliss and how theyve got it pretty good, the girls are ..
Chapter 4 and 5 - Sam

Chapter 4 and 5 - Sam

A Chapter by Lolo K


these two chapters are still describing their simple lives of happiness, just trying to engrane in your mind a simple picture of a group of carefree f..
Chapter 6 - Truth or Dare

Chapter 6 - Truth or Dare

A Chapter by Lolo K


this is where you see relationships starting to form and also the tention between the guys
Chapter 7 - Austin

Chapter 7 - Austin

A Chapter by Lolo K


okay so this cahpter kind of describes how the group is so tight, they love to play around with each other but they really do care, and its also the s..
Chapter 8 and 9 - The Last Look

Chapter 8 and 9 - The Last Look

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this is the last scene of happiness and pure carefree bliss before the crash so you know what a transition it would be. More of Austin and Lauren
Chapter 10 - The Crash

Chapter 10 - The Crash

A Chapter by Lolo K


Its a really short chapter but its just describing the crash scene
Chapter 11 - The Victims

Chapter 11 - The Victims

A Chapter by Lolo K


we flash from Austin to Jamie to Lauren. I like this particular scene because you can see more of Austin's and Lauren's relationship forming. It als..
Chapter 12 - Competition

Chapter 12 - Competition

A Chapter by Lolo K


Here you can see how Sam really likes Lauren but shes stolen away by one glace from Austin. This is also where you can see the relationship between D..
Chapter 13 - Teams

Chapter 13 - Teams

A Chapter by Lolo K


you can see here that Daniel trusts Lisey and the other way around. You can see their relationship forming farther, and same as Austin and Lauren