I wish you a happy holidays and best wishes. I want to thank everyone for taking the time to look at my page, any reviews or comments. I am taking a semi-break and will be back in full force in January 2007.
Things are always more beautiful when they are confusing. The spontaneity of chaos, the wild inflections of premature judgements... They bring in the sublime but naive analysis of emotional responses.
I hate listening to a song too often, instead, I'll listen to it once or twice after I realize it's going to have an affect on me, then I'll play it over and over again in my head and let it linger for days. Quite often, my head will start creating sounds that it believes is part of the song.
Afterwards, I'll listen to it again, but only once! Starve the art in your head and enjoy the remnants!
Hey Mag,
Although I am not "known" for being a writer of rhyming prose or poetry, I wanted to show you that I did, [and sometimes, still do], write such a style. Now come on by and check on the "featured" prose poem, "Dream Sequence: The Spider Woman's Web." I really loved this prose poem and the rhyming scheme was really incredible for me as it was truly writing itself. This was a "true" dream that I did have and I awoke and wrote it down and then, over a period of time, I refined it into what it stands today. I am very proud of this piece. Let me know what you think of not only the prose poem but the "scheme." I'm interested to hear your opinion.
I have to cheer you up;
The weather started getting rough-
Uh,
the tiny ship was tossed
-
I said, the-
the Minow would be lost . . .
Now,
nah, I said that
the Minow would be lost
-
I'm talkin'bout the Loove Boat,
exciting and
brand
new.
Mah son now,
I'm- I'm talking about the Love Boat
exciting and
brand
new
-
Now we're up in the big leagues.
I got my turn at bat!
-(lol)
My fish won't fry in the kitchen
There aint nothing wrong with that,
Said, "we're moving on up."
(moving on up)
To the Eastside
(moving on up)
To a deluxe apartment, in the sky-high
Oh-
OH! We're moving ownup
to a deluxe apartment in the skiiiii
we finaly got a piece of the pie,
It seems today, that all you see
is violence in movies and sex on tv
but what happened to those old fashion values
on which we used to rely,
lucky there is a family guy...
i said,
lucky there is a family,
lucky there's a family
luck there's a fam-
Laugh and cryyyy
HE'S
OUR
FAM
LY
GUUUUUUUUUYThank you, thank you very much.
Do you feel better now, I hope so, I performed it for you;
:-)
muah, Jl
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