Mr Eilly : Writing

Pen 15 Club

Pen 15 Club

A Chapter by Mr Eilly


The opening to a book I'm toying with! Constructive criticism to spice up the first paragraph please!
Canavan the Asian Man

Canavan the Asian Man

A Chapter by Mr Eilly


Just a piece from a book Ive been working on!
Alo Carter-Bigley

Alo Carter-Bigley

A Chapter by Mr Eilly


Just a piece from a book Im working on!
Curse words, Cows and the Other Night

Curse words, Cows and the Other Night

A Book by Mr Eilly


THESE ARE ONLY PIECES OF AN COMPLETELY UNFINISHED PIECE! PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK