Oh no, it's completely fine. Don't go blaming yourself, poetry doesn't come out so easily. And u think the piece is wonderful. I'll send back my piece as soon as it is ready. Thank you:)
Good day!
Nah! I don't want to take part credit for a work that was not meant to be collaborated. It is your poem, and no one but you can take a decision like that:)
But haha, I'll make it as fast as I can!
Hello,
I tried writing the first stanza of our collab, but the words just don't ring. I am so sorry for taking time! Can you please, please tell me how to start, like what to start writing with? Thank you:)
thankyou for your great reviews! :-] you have a certain rawrness yo your work that I love in poets... I can feel you personality speaking to me in your work! Great POET! :-]
- H O N E Y <3
I'll start off and try my best.... And are fully aware that I'm merely thirteen? So xD I have no idea how to write erotic, sensual, et cetera....
Contemporary English sounds good:)
Okaay....as I've not read the bible(I'm Hindu) a little bit of enlightening might help?
Or let me make this similar-
1. What should be the content of the first stanza?
2. Is the poem going to be written in simple, colloquial English or complicated, book like English?