hey its lyla....your style is incredible..although ive said this many many times already i just felt it needed to be said again....
Midnight Lover is amazing.
you're very welcome, kate. i enjoyed reading your story. you are a talented writer with a lot of potential. just keep practicing, and more than anyting else, read all the great writers, and pay attention to how they do things. and listen to the way their words sound to the ear and roll of the tongue. in my opinion reading the great writers is the best way to learn new skills and ways of doing things. good luck and keep writing. take care