Jenny Leigh

Posted 8 Years Ago

Ah, don't do this to me! This is like a cliffhanger Now I'm looking forward to it even more now! I cannot wait!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Many thanks. Currently about halfway through the next chapter. Will probably be done by tomorrow. Think you may be interested to know something is up with a team member...I'll leave you with that bit of info. <3

Posted 8 Years Ago

Okay, so for some reason, my full review won't post on "A Whisper in the Dark," so I'll just post it on here for you. I don't know what's wrong.

Review:
AHHH, Illinois <3 It's by far my favorite state. If it wasn't so expensive, I'd be living there right now.
Sorry, that was a bit random, huh?

Anyway, on to the rest of your chapter, my dear:

This is essentially the chapter where you begin to gradually reveal parts of the plot. As always (and I'm sure you're getting tired of hearing this from me), I love your writing.
The tension and mystery that you added throughout the chapter literally made me sit at the edge of the seat. It is now a quarter to ten at night and all alone. It wasn't the best idea to read this now, I admit. The scenes with Draven and the ghost in his room whispering creeped me out more than I thought it would; especially when it would just randomly stop.

The way you began the chapter was also nice. It flowed very well. You managed to introduce us to their usual routine without dragging it out too long or without "info dumping" it on us, as it's called.

Tyler is still my favorite, and I don't really know why.
Nice character interaction, too.

I'm really interested to know where this story is headed and you've done a great job at keeping me hooked after the first chapter.

As always, I love your work, Jenny, and I am most definitely looking forward to your next chapter. Thank you for sending me a "read request" every time you finish one; I tend to not notice when people add stuff, so it certainly helps!
Keep up the wonderful work, my dear ^_^