Edward James

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hey, thanks for the thoughtful review you left on "At Daybreak." A lot of the craft of poetry I feel is trying to anticipate how a reader will respond to certain words and phrases, what images they paint, emotions, or thoughts inspired. It's tricky. There's a transition with "for now, at least it seems to him," that is meant to throw a bit of a curveball in there. I've actually been toying with writing more about this mouse, taking him on a bit of an adventure . . . it's far outside the box for me, so I'm still thinking it over. Don't want it to get too cheesey, haha. But I might do it.

Thanks again. I look forward to reading and reviewing some of your own work later today.

Michael

Posted 17 Years Ago

hello, i'm getting back to you quite late, but thanks for the review on ruins of what used to be home. i was so surprised to see such a large review but i appreciated the fact that someone took time out of their day to comment, and yes, ramble (hehe) about my poetry. Thanks again ♥

-Kim

Posted 17 Years Ago

hello, i'm getting back to you quite late, but thanks for the review on ruins of what used to be home. i was so surprised to see such a large review but i appreciated the fact that someone took time out of their day to comment, and yes, ramble (hehe) about my poetry. Thanks again ♥

-Kim

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your kind review Edward, it means much. I'll be stopping by soon :)

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hi Edward,
Thank you for reading "A Poem," it was actualy written for all the girls I've ever known before... and the ones I don't even know yet. By the way, I was with Christina Marie and Carol Maric and Angel Marie Antoinette and Kasia in New York at the conference last month. I'll have to go and see if I can get to know Kisses Of Sweet Love!
sa

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks... I'm suprised too...they are so stupid, funny, and harmless. The fact they shook a major american city is proof many of us are so, so unworthy.

Posted 17 Years Ago

thats alot
i have 2 dogs a cat 5 rats
and my oteher favorits are
horses and tigers
pigs and snakes are so sweet!
i want to becoem a vet...
but i need pre cal math :S lol

Posted 17 Years Ago

what animals do you like?

Posted 17 Years Ago

(For future notice) Doug, Douglas, and/or dpc are all perfectly ok with me. It did make me smile, though.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Oh, and I'm wondering why you called me "dpc."

Don't get me wrong, I'm not mad or anything...it's just that all my friends call me that and it's a little strange from someone I've never met. Intriguing, though.