as i read your last comment again, i congratulate you on your graduation and degree in art! i am close friends with many art teachers and creators and know of the work that goes into the degree! congratulations!
once again, i appreciate your review of ADDICTION. what would you suggest for making the first part a more concrete story? what did you see that could be changed? I would greatly appreciate your opinion. Again, thanks for your time!
Ever since I was a kid, whenever I couldn't sleep, I'd imagine an enormous weight (almost ACME style) was dangling inches above me by a very thin wire. For some reason, the thought that this weight could and would drop at any time was a great comfort and would knock me out. I think that's next on my writing list.
Hey, Ingrid! I took your comment to heart and continued working on my ADDICTION story. I just posted a much lengthened first part! I would greatly appreciate and value your comments! Thanks!
As of now, I greatly enjoy reading your work. (and I appreciate a little background on where you come from!) I can't want to see more of what you write. I hope you find your name here and the cafe and, once again, Welcome!
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