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This is the first poem I've written in a few years. I want opinions on how to make it better.

I wrote this story for class. Opinions?

How does it feel? Knowing we aren't meant to be. Have you ever thought about How much you could hurt me? I guess you didn't realize I t..

I just wrote it out of boredom. It's nothing real good...

Daddy, why do you treat me so bad? I was your sweet little angel, but you ruined my innocence. You pushd me over the edge. Please tell me why. ..

I am suppose to write a poem of what I fear...it's not done yet though

It's not really the best...but I think it's decent. ~stomp out the bullying~

eh, break up

I miss that smile, that laugh and hair. I miss those eyes, it just ain't fair. He took you away. You never said bye. I wanna see you, I wish ..

Look me in the eye and tell me what you see. A brave soldier or a crying little kid? Losing you is a thought that shouldn’t be thought about. ..