I hear that man, sorry for bringing you to this s****y piece of social networking that goes down every other day and periodically loses all its writing! I'm tired too.
I do agree, though, the poem could have been written with a little more originality. Although, it was written from a 16-year old boy's perspective. I'll leave it up for interpretation.
Thank you for commenting on my poem!!! I have to agree with your comment though. It did appear a bit cheesy and cliche. But isn't that what love has become in today's society? I think we have lost bases with the originality of love. Hopefully, one day I can find originality through writing.