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This is an excerpt from my young adult novel and important  to plot development. It seems short like I am missing something. Any feedback is welcome! 

Last Prophecy

Your greatest fear will come to pass, when one is born both half and half. HIding among humanity, blood can reveal all of the history. Blood and truth, blood and lies. Chaos, death and destruction will rise. The blood of one will compromise all, darkness will reign regardless of immortality. 

Thanks so much!