Write = Get Reviews Forum Hello and short story

The name's Jones, Dr.Jones (Disclaimer - I'm not actually a Dr., just referencing a great trilogy). I have recently taken up an active interest in writing short stories, especially fiction, and am hoping for a few comments on my latest work, "The Traveller" (still not particularly sure about the name).

I'm not going to post it in this thread as it's fairly long, however you can find it through my account or listed in this group's Writing area. Any feedback is welcomed and appreciated; please let me know if you have any works that you want reviewed.

Thanks,

Luke Jones