Write = Get Reviews Forum PLEASE REVIEW MY BOOK

I know that I already posted a thread but the book that I'm writing is the one that I'm seriously hoping to get published this year so it would seriously mean a lot to me if I could get some reviews? It's rated a Mature so you can only read it if you're registered as over 18 at the moment but I'm thinking about lowering the rating because it's only rated Mature because of swearing. I would be so so grateful if you guys could give it a read and let me know what you think and I'll repay the favour, obviously! Sorry for spamming the forums T_T